Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?
Nowadays, taking a year out to live or study abroad is becoming very popular. To many
people, especially young adults the chance to spend an extended period of time overseas
is an attractive one. However, there are both advantages and disadvantages in deciding to
do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the challenges we face when we are
overseas.
When we talk about the advantages of moving abroad, one of the main positives of
heading overseas is that it gives you the freedom and an opportunity to fulfil your dreams.
What I mean by this is that you have the chance to meet people from different cultural
backgrounds and learn to cope with foreign customs and food. This can make you more
satisfied personally.
Secondly, moving abroad can lead to a better quality of life, for example, Australia and
New Zealand are the most livable countries in the world due to economic weather and
especially multicultural societies. These countries have better plans to develop their
countries and encourage a better work ethic to benefit people. In addition by studying
overseas, you can obtain qualifications and language skills which you cant probably get
from your own country.
However, there are some disadvantages of living or studying in a foreign country. The
main problem is that the people who move to a foreign country experience loneliness. In
my experience, when I first moved to Australia to study I had to make money on my own
for my university fees and I was studying and working virtually all the time
so I felt lonely and missed my family back in Sri Lanka. Furthermore, we have to learn a
new language and always had to communicate with people from different cultures.
Sometimes the weather is terrible in different seasons especially in winter which is the
coldest season and it is really hard to work outside.
All things considered, starting a new life in a foreign country is never easy. You need to
take both the advantages and disadvantages in your stride. To enjoy a better life with
a decent job with luxury vehicles and houses you will have to face issues like cultural
shock and language barriers you have to grind your way to earn money to achieve your
future goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i mean, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01578947368 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71032702384 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518421052632 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6400037286 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.38176352705 616% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138862558116 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408537576628 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497986975995 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0353267881015 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578374854373 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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