Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
why do many working people not get enough exercise?
what can be done about this problem?
There is a fact that workers hardly do exercise, and that can lead to some negative impacts on them. In this essay, i will analyze the causes before expressing my own view as well as my own solution as follow
I think that it is difficult for workers to have enough time for working out, because most of workers have a lot of things to do at day week. We can find a truth that doing exercise can not happen during the time they are working. Additionally, even they have free time, they still want to spend that time to relax, because after working time, they can be tired and stress
To solve that issue, the one thing is workers have to arrange their working timetable reasonably. they should be strict with themselves, especially they should get up soon and do exercise every morning frequently. The second thing is companies should have more activity to care for their staff's health. For example, companies should host picnics every year such as camping on the mountain or swimming competition, that will bring many exciting things for their employees after stressful working time. That is also a motivation for their staff to work effectively.
In conclusion, the lack of doing exercise for workers is a serious issue, and they should improve that statement. The reasons they rarely do exercise are they do not much time to do that and after working time, they feel too tired to do anything. To solve that problem, laborers and their companies should apply some effective methods to work out more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...egative impacts on them. In this essay, i will analyze the causes before expressi...
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Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
... my own view as well as my own solution as follow I think that it is difficult for worke...
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Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the workers') or simply say ''most workers''.
Suggestion: most of the workers; most workers
...ve enough time for working out, because most of workers have a lot of things to do at day week....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of things to do at day week. We can find a truth that doing exercise can not happ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...nge their working timetable reasonably. they should be strict with themselves, espec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, still, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73003802281 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39872428228 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532319391635 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8744813476 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.090909091 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296260841885 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118508339831 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434805294433 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170620226912 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764031358765 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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