Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialise with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children.
what problems do children face when going online without parental supervision?
Internet has become a very important part of our lives today. There are a lot of children who use the internet to enage with others and no one supervises them to monitor their online activities. This situation can put children in risky postion which can also be life endangering. In the following paragraph, I will discuss the problem and the solution for this situaion.
The main problem that children can experience while socialising online without guidance is that they can get robbed by the thieves. These days many robbers manipulate naive people on the internet and steal their confidential bank details by disgusing themselves as a friend. Since children are not street smart they can end up giving personal information which can cause their family financial loss. According to a survey conducted by Toronto University, it was found that 80% of people got robbed at least once during their childhood.
The solution for this concerning issue is educating children about the safe practices of using the internet. All the parents, guidiarns and teachers should consistently teach children about the information that should not be shared on the virtual world. Also, schools should include a chapter on tips for healthy internet usage. In a study done by Harvard University it was found that children who do not indulge in risky online behaviours were guided by their mentors.
To conclude, internet might not be a safe place for children if they are left by themselves to figure out what's right and wrong. This can make them victim of fiancial frauds. In order to eradiacte this problem the adults should constantly guide children about safe usage of the internet. My parents always supervised my online activites which prevented me from associating with dangerous people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13402061856 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63892019816 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7536106002 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438347807879 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133891548991 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778285504726 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269777036954 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591864432763 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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