For many young people today, shopping is their favorite free time activity.
Why do you think this has happened?
Should young people be encouraged to do different activities in their free time?
Shopping has become the favorite pass time activity for teenagers as well as adults. With easy access to transportation facilities and the trend of spending weekends in big malls shopping has become the new trend for spending time alone as well as with friends especially on weekends. However, youngsters should be encouraged to spend their time in more useful activities instead of wasting their time and money in shopping expensive fashion items just to keep up with the latest fashion trend.
Beyond any qualms shopping has become the most beloved fun activity for not just children, students but even the parents are also addicted to shopping. Nowadays, people from all age groups like to spend their free time such as holidays and weekends in malls for not just shopping clothes but also shopping the latest gadgets such as expensive mobile phones, latest gold jewelry, trendy watches, video games etc. This trend is popular as now even the middle class population wants to keep pace with the latest styles by buying the trending products in the market. Moreover, people of all age groups have easy access to transportation facilities and can spend money in such places for recreational purpose and keep up with the latest trends in fashion.
However, I believe that youngsters should not be encouraged to spend their free time in shopping activities. It is not just wastage of time but also of their hard earned money. Teenagers and youngsters can instead utilize their time in learning new skills and enhancing their own skills which can be helpful for them in securing jobs and building their career. For example, they can join NGOs, attend a music classes or learn a new game as utilizing their time and money in learning these skills will add to their personality and they will be well equipped to face life as a mature and learned individual.
In conclusion, I believe that spending time and money on shopping is not going to be of any help in future for younger generations and instead they should be encouraged to focus on more useful activities that can build their personality and improve their communication skills and also teach them the importance of spending wisely and saving money for future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
... gadgets such as expensive mobile phones, latest gold jewelry, trendy watches, video gam...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9490616622 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52549762909 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461126005362 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4942202146 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.833333333 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0833333333 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307986422675 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14144526232 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804280043678 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205902257544 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366402535286 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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