Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no harm saying that topic attracts immediate attention owing to its uniqueness. There are two dimensions to this topic, one set of people assert that writing letters is an obsolete medium of communication and is no longer required, however, other group of people are of the view that conventional methods can never be too old to use. I moderately agree that these mediums cannot be utilized in this fast era but using them mediums at a personal level of communication is no harm. Let's view both school of thoughts in details before reaching to a final verdict.
To begin with, it is undoubtedly accepted that with advancements in technology our modes of communication has been drastically changed over the time. These mediums such as email, fax, whatsapp saves a lot of time and hassle of writing letters and posting. For instance, in running days if we want to convey a message to someone, that is important yet urgent, this can be done with few clicks or taps of our laptop’s keyboard rather than writing a manual letter that will be delivered in many days based on the distance from one side to another.
On the contrary, we should not overlook the importance and value of conventional methods of communication that is writing letters by hand. This method includes a sense of personalization to the reader. For instance, sending a manual letter to someone these days may sound ridiculous but the receiver would perceive it as a token of affection from sender. In this fast paced competitive world, where people do not have time to spend with their loved ones. Sending someone a hand written letter definitely shows the value and affection of sender towards the reader.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, it is a positive reality that we do not require hand written letters as communication channel these days. But in order to value our ancestor’s inventions, we should be using them at personal level if not possible for business use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 490, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...onal level of communication is no harm. Lets view both school of thoughts in details...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92492492492 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88609055781 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5079636457 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166474579497 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556572071072 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393856415475 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977511324938 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285119753063 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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