More houses are needed in many countries to cope with increasing populations. Would it be better to build houses in existing towns and cities, or to develop new towns in rural areas?
With the rise of population in developed localities, there is an increase in the number of houses too. there is a contemplation that new residential buildings can be raised in the urban areas. but some have the opinion that backward regions must be urbanised by constructing new apartments and houses. this essay will discuss about the points that emphasize the evolution of underdeveloped areas to advanced ones.
it is a certitude that poeple are migrating towards the towns and cities. this is due to the lack of required facilities and amenities in the rural regions. this in turn leads to the growth of living space in the advanced locales. For example, though few hospitals are present in the rural areas, advanced treatments are available only in the city. if all the advancements and progresses are high in cities, immigration of people to cities would obviously increase. Likewise, people shift themselves to urban places for acquiring education from eminent and noteworthy universities. so it is necessary to build new houses in the cities.
Secondly, the rate of population in towns has immensely matured and its beyond the mark. but the residential areas in the developed territories is reducing as more space are already occupied. For example, i the late twentieth century, the village ambattur was not considered to be a part of the capital city, chennai. With the increasing people, all these villages are now brought under the division called city. What would happen if all the living areas are completely filled?The rate of population per square feet in chennai has touched the peak.Consequently, the lakes are encroached and built into apartments. this proves the fact that the underdeveloped regions must be converted to areas f for people to live.
To conclude,though there is a plethora construction of residences in the prevailing cities, the rural areas are to be developed so that these might be utilised by the people coming out from certain villages. I strongly agree with the notion that the rural areas are to be urbanised.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12462908012 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98007069562 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53412462908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6570028215 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8947368421 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293496257996 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847033154118 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681154477916 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170660322927 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233008253259 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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