More people are spending their free time watching movies.
Why is this?
Is it a good thing or bad thing?
The invention of Television was one of the biggest discoveries of human mankind. It served as a platform for the people to quench their thirst of information and entertainment. In earlier days, movie viewing was considered a privilege, but in today's time, it is become a common trend among the locals, to passively engage themselves by watching movies in their free time.
Technological advancement and the easily availability of the internet on the phones, the laptops and the I-pads is to be blamed for this habit. Furthermore, for a country like India, people are crazy behind the Bollywood Movies and the stars, they pay big bucks to watch the movies in theatres and some others at their home comfort.
Additionally, there are huge promotions carried on for these movies on various platforms, like the news, the malls, on the social networking sites, etc., that creates a buzz among the people to go and watch the movie in theatres by paying hefty prices.
In my opinion, engaging in an activity like viewing a movie is a waste of time, because it serves no purpose other than entertainment. When a person watches a movie in his free time, he is missing out on the other important tasks of life. It is an unproductive activity, which does not lead to any suitable outcome. Some people prefer lazily lying down on the couches and see movies, rather than participate in an outdoor physical activity, that could benefit their health too.
To conclude, I would suggest, entertainment is necessary in one's life, but people should try to maintain a balance and minimize the usage of watching television or movies and try to do something fruitful.
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| 2019-08-29 | sashi555 | 78 | view |
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| 2019-03-30 | Salman Malik | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... suggest, entertainment is necessary in ones life, but people should try to maintain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.925 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79001270936 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5224193784 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1706546207 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628271991124 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432103327083 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912527286456 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374110665406 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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