Since most information about culture and history can be found on internet, museums are not needed anymore. To what extent do you agree?
Now a day, internet provides most of information regarding culture and history, so it is considered by many that museums are not required now. In my opinion, I believe that although most of information can be found on internet, personal visit to museums is must for people who want to have in depth knowledge.
On the one hand, it is considered that information about culture is found on internet and one should not go to museum as gathering may lead to spread of infections and diseases. In other words, in museums different people visits and one does not know if someone is having some serious infectious diseases. Furthermore, internet provides a lot of information on the click of mouse and people does not need to waste time while standing in long queues or in traffic to go the museums.
On the other hand, some people think that even with advent of internet, museums are still important and I agree considering the fact that visuals are more beneficial and effective than theoretical knowledge available on internet. Young children and students, for instance, require in depth knowledge about culture and history academically and personal visit to museums leave an indelible footprints on their mind which can be described by them easily. Moreover, visit to museums broadens the thinking of visitors.
In conclusion, although people may vary in their opinion, I consider that even with availability of all the information on internet, museums are still important as they it helps to know and understand our history and culture in a better way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'footprint'?
Suggestion: footprint
...nal visit to museums leave an indelible footprints on their mind which can be described by...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... museums are still important as they it helps to know and understand our history and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03088803089 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80365247425 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525096525097 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4561086833 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.777777778 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307500377838 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127632143941 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600720810046 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189279691163 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506093877341 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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