Some people think that government is wasting money on arts and this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
It is believed by some that spending of money on arts by government is wastage and these funds could be spent somewhere else. I completely agree with the view that such money should be utilized on other prioritized issues such as health, education, environment which will really benefit the individuals as well as humanity.
A good reason to support this view is that spending on other important sectors such as education will give right to that part of population who is deprived of their basic rights as they belongs to poor background and their parents cannot support for their costly education. Many children need to work to support for their studies and cannot concentrate on their schooling which adversely affect their results. Furthermore, many people and children dies every year due to deficiency of basic nutrients and daily diet. As such, government spending on education and health sector rather than arts will really help such gifted people to have their basic rights which will make a healthy society having rich knowledge which can compete in global market.
Another reason to consider is that spending should be on another necessary global issue of environment. Global warming is affecting not only an individual or a country, rather is affecting whole world, marine life and our ecosystem. Contribution on part of every single is necessary to control this issue and government ought to concentrate on this issue to save our vast culture and biodiversity rather than promoting arts.
In conclusion, I believe that rather than spending on arts, government focus should be those sectors which would help in making a strong and knowledgeable people in all aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, really, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16788321168 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66380358494 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8817223184 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.6 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17998242538 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756403158296 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079713334152 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121278365437 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906037657652 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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