One can safely stated that countries are getting highly integrated due to globalization. However, not all the majority believes that it would be beneficial to society. Therefore, opposite opinions should be brought up here for a closer evaluation, before coming to any conclusion.
From one point of view, globalization has brought us more options in terms of education, food, style, and culture. A vietnamese citizen, now, could try Italian or Chinese cuisine, study in an international school which follows many different education systems namely liberty education. More importantly, a person may have a higher chance of job opportunity because the globalization brought new jobs. For example, Nike company opened a new factory in Vietnam therefore, there will be a need for labor workers, managers, etc.
On the other hand, globalization brings more competitors to the local market and it would be impossible for small business owners to compete with these blue chip companies. As a result, these business owners would suffer from loss and it is challenging for a country to be prosperous if its citizens deny choosing the local products. Besides, due to globalization, a nation will gradually lose their own identity, for example, there are not many people wearing "Ao Dai" - the national costume of Vietnamese and children in Vietnam would prefer to have their dinner at KFC, Pizza Hut rather than eat vietnamese cuisine. To some extend, gradually, people can not recoginize which nation a person belongs to.
In conclusion, despite the benefits that globalization could bring, we can not avoid its side effects. Personally, I would highly appreciate the globalization happening in my country, provided there are restriction actions from the government so all the negative impacts could be minimized.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42957746479 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99460066084 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654929577465 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5027097847 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102464626117 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380338335381 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034179688641 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651980253714 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403618817159 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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