Nowadays it is not only large companies that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, technology is invasive in different fields of life. It allows filmmakers with a low budget to show their talents in the cinematography area. In my opinions, this tendency is positive for various reasons.
Firstly, the latest electronic devices, such as iPhone, allow users to produce an appealing movie without a pricey professional camera. Thanks for that, young people are encouraged to design movie scenes in their own ways. Many well-known horrible movies like Lights Out originates from amateur videos on Youtube before they are fully developed to big-screen versions. The development of digital technology also reduces the budget reliance of directors on eminent sponsors. In the past, various films were delayed or cancelled because sponsors and directors were in conflicts and then sponsors refused to give financial support for the project.
Secondly, digital technology plays a crucial role in the media and press. With a phone on hand, people can film any events and moments as soon as they happen. These sensational videos then go viral on social media such as Facebook, Twitter, allowing a mass audience to update latest breaking news over the world. In other words, modern technology partly transformed the mainstream media into the online form. It also makes the press more timely, interactive and influential.
In conclusion, the advance of electronic gadgets allows young and amateur directors to have a chance to follow their dreams in screening. These devices also shape the form of the media as they support online press to be more popular. In my opinion, the application of technology in filming should be encouraged among young people because of its benefits.
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Suggestion: update the latest
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30111524164 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7199450706 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617100371747 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5185932543 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147835749922 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459546564868 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396331178193 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838282697122 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111458561471 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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