In a lot of nations, males and females are now permanently employed. It is my firm belief that they should divide the home tasks evenly so that they put off pressure among themselves.
The most important reason why employed couples should share domestic responsibilities equally is that they will be all tired after long hours at work. In actual fact, it will not be fair to let one person do all the tasks yet both of them have been working the whole day. For instance, the husband would be relaxed watching television, while the wife washing dishes, cooking and assisting children with homework. In contrast, if they help each other they could quickly finish their tasks and have time to rest. Therefore, sharing of responsibilities is very important is very important.
Another justification is that people work different shifts. To illustrate this, wife could be on night duty and husband working during the day, so every one of them should do the available domestic chores when at home. For example, during the night when the wife is not at home, the husband will make sure that supper is ready, children's homework and preparation for the next day has been done. Thereby, this will not create backlog of housework and thus reducing pressure on the other partner.
In conclusion, I strongly accept that the sharing of responsibilities relieves stress on both parties. As a result, it gives them more time to relax.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- It is difficult for many people to create a balance between their professional and their personal life.What are the causes?What can be done to solve this problem? 84
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of their children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 67
- Researches show that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, the advertisements of food products should be banned in the same way as cigarettes advertising is banned in many countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of their children Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
... all tired after long hours at work. In actual fact, it will not be fair to let one person ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er. In conclusion, I strongly accept that the sharing of responsibilities rel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92531120332 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67326207566 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618257261411 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3486034246 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3076923077 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985516829699 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349631327382 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254927246009 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564758036897 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273148462829 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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