Nowadays, many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children playing computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
The enormous growth in the use of the Internet over the last decade has led to radical changes to the way that young people consume and share information. Therefore, there exist many teenagers addicting to the Internet dramatically. This essay will first suggest that the most serious problems caused by this phenomenon are children’s access to dangerous content and online crimes, and then argue that adequate legislation, access restriction, and IT security improvement.
One of the first problems of widespread access to computers is that websites with potentially harmful information are easily accessible to children. Indeed, smart devices are within their reach. For example, pornography sites are easily accessible to them because they can register with a site and claim to be an adult. Therefore, there is no doubt that this would affect their thoughts and developments, which negatively impacts the children and society.
Furthermore, another major problem is the growth of online fraud and hacking. In particular, there exist horrific online crimes such as credit card hacking, trafficking online, and online sexual harassment. For instance, these days, there are constant news stories about government and company websites that have been hacked. These hacking activities result in the loss of confidential information falling into the hands of criminals. As a result, sensitive private information must be kept protected from lawbreakers.
It is utterly important that action is taken to combat these problems. Governments should ensure that adequate legislation and controls for young people should be proposed. They can do this by building more complex website access criteria. Furthermore, parents also have a part to play. They need to monitor children and restrict access by setting passwords, controlling the time of using computers, or checking the content of the website regularly. Last but not least, companies must also improve IT security systems by reviewing current systems for weaknesses. These actions must be done immediately to reduce the consequences of youngsters’ addiction to the Internet and online crimes.
The Internet is an amazing technological innovation that has transformed people’s lives, but not without negative impacts. The two most obvious impacts are teenagers’ obsession with the cyber world and online crimes, which may have consequences on their overall development and society. Therefore, governments, parents, and companies need to tackle these problems by following my advice above.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-06-13 | Thuc Linh Dinh | 84 | view |
- What are the advantages and disadvantages of renewable fuels 84
- The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in its young people To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school What are the reasons What could be done to solve this problem 84
- Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life other people feel that other factors are more important Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 44
- Write an essay of at least 250 words to discuss the importance of self studying 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblems by following my advice above.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in particular, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66579634465 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92613704682 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584856396867 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9034675488 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6363636364 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4090909091 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144086998868 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371141318514 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369413103843 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743212837798 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421351371747 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.