Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items.
What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days, people often like to purchase their needs from renowned brand shops. Before concluding this trend as a positive or negative one, it is necessary to explore the root cause behind it.
The foremost reason behind this development is the availability of numerous brand stores in towns and cities. Nowadays, manufacturers across many industries have started setting up their outlets in different cities. With an increased presence, they are now able to create an appeal for their products among consumers who previously had no scope to buy from them. For example, in my hometown, which is a small one, two years ago famous clothing brands like Gucci and H&M opened their outlets. Since then many have rushed to those shops to purchase their products.
This development can be regarded as a positive one since trade activities are increasing as a result of such consumption behaviour. As people have developed a taste of shopping from famous brand stores, eminent producers from abroad can get attracted to establish their businesses. For instance, after observing that many Indians are gradually shifting towards buying luxury cars, in 2018, 5 luxurious automobile companies from Europe declared that they will soon start their business in India.
In conclusion, people’s desire to purchase from famous brand shops have mainly occurred due to the expansion of those businesses across the country. It is indeed a constructive development as economic activities are likely to manifold with more producers entering into business. In the coming days, with a further rise in people’s buying power, it is expected that this trend would continue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ike Gucci and H&M opened their outlets. Since then many have rushed to those shops to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36882129278 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75214263077 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3626672336 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217709172231 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771307945448 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341641003638 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134659671725 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120313399137 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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