Nowadays media should include more good news in their publications. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Media is a powerful tool when it comes to carrying relevant information regarding the news, current events and happenings in the world today, whether it be good or bad. Now some suggest that media should be leaning towards a more optimistic approach of broadcasting of their news, however, it might also be more of a downside rather than helpful. In this essay, I will discuss and give examples why I believe a realistic, though bad news could not be compensated by a good news but with a lesser truth.
First of all, it is indeed a joy to hear good news every time. As the recipient of the news, it would certainly make my day better to receive a good headlines first thing in the morning. However, it could result to frustrations later on if I found out that those good news were just fabricated stories after all. For instance, it might be better if the media will publish a news about the current crisis happening in a country, rather than sugar-coating to make it more acceptable to the people. This is so that people, even though it might make them feel discouraged, they will be aware of the crisis thus will make themselves prepared for it.
What is shocking to know is that, nowadays I think that some broadcasting companies are doing some kind of news distortion to make it more appealing to the public. Hence, we were forced to believe a falsified information, as we were deprived of the knowledge of what is really going on. In our country for example, a broadcasting station might report the only the good side of the news without mentioning the other side, while another station might report only the bad side of the story and will not report the other side. This makes the people more confused, as they thought the media is becoming biased in what they report, thus might lead them to just believe what they want to believe.
To conclude, media contains all the information with regards to current happenings and events that are occurring on a daily basis, and I think that it is better to report the truth despite being bad rather than accepting what is good but falsified.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...ght be better if the media will publish a news about the current crisis happening in a...
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Line 9, column 352, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the only the'. Did you mean 'only the'?
Suggestion: only the
...le, a broadcasting station might report the only the good side of the news without mentionin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, really, regarding, so, thus, while, after all, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64343163539 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5280577343 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490616621984 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4586091792 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.230769231 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6923076923 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168589213944 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666774547042 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346064131686 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10545076519 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481930962039 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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