It is an obvious truth that the majority of people spend 4 years or more in order to get some paper certification on academic lessons. While, other people strongly believe, youth should be encouraged to learn some skills which are going to be more efficient. This essay deals with arguments for and against this controversial matter.
On the one hand, there are some advantages related to obtaining academic knowledge that should be considered. First and most importantly, is about getting familiar with scientific stuff which seems extremely important. In addition, it can come up to being well_knowledge and ready to face with problems easier. So, it must not neglected, especially in some majors like history and geography.
On the other hand, people who are opposed to academic studying claim, unless people have practical skill, they are not going to be as useful as they should have been at work. The most significant thing is due to necessity of different skills. For instance, for being a good nurse not only academic qualification but related items which are essential in hospital must be though. Because, at work your chance to learn new things is pretty slim. Secondly, however, you may be educated from best university, you will not be employed without skills. Hence, tempting different kinds of people for learning more skills is pretty vital.
In conclusion, the amount of people who prefer to go to universities in order to get degree is boosting but some people reckon, more attention must be paid on learning of different skills. In my perspective, both studying the lessons of university and getting practical skills must be considered as crucial items and no option can be omitted. But it seems our education system is more worry about just academical education than anything else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e essential in hospital must be though. Because, at work your chance to learn new thing...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the best'.
Suggestion: from the best
... Secondly, however, you may be educated from best university, you will not be employed wi...
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Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cademical education than anything else.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09427609428 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73346762859 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0362230957 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242223134509 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785464779235 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701669787502 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151720428417 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690777976383 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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