Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
Industrialization has forced people to move from a smaller town into large cities in search of better avenues. Though this movement has opened a wealth of opportunities on one hand on the other, it also has brought in many problems like unhealthy lifestyle, anxiety, depression to name a few. In my view, the government should help people to move to smaller towns. I will in the below paragraphs elucidate these problems which will help to support my opinion.
Nowadays people living in large cities face issues related to their health due to demanding work culture. many companies in the urban parts look only into their profits and not promote a healthy work-life balance due to which many of their employees face a risk of health issues like anxiety, high blood pressure and stress disorders. This is evident from a recent survey done by Economic times in India which concluded that a majority of people working in large cities considered moving back to smaller towns as they considered that it would be less stressful there.
Similarly, cost of living is much higher in urban areas which means more pressure on the families living there additionally to keep up such lifestyle they spent most of their time including weekend and holidays away from their families thus affecting their personal lives. In my experience, one of my friend who used to work in Sales in a telecom company used to travel around 15 days a month which affected his social life.
To conclude, living in cities has many disadvantages thus local government should create an ecosystem of employment in smaller towns by encouraging people to move to smaller towns where they can enjoy a healthier lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, similarly, so, thus, as for, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96819787986 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64069919007 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4801474126 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.6 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368807762411 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147259850277 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910084854374 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22001751655 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913607783322 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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