Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, media give excessive coverage to negative news and overlook the positive aspects of the world. It is often argued that this emphasis on negativity has an adverse impact on society. And, I concur with this notion to some extent because no matter what will happen, the news represents the information of incidents and happenings around the globe whether it is positive or negative, it cannot be ignored. It certainly deserves attention, meanwhile, good news should also get adequate coverage.
Apparently, media houses give too much importance to stories of crime, violence, and other problems because they have a shock value. They easily capture the attention of the reader. Since the media is constantly striving to attract more eyeballs, they highlight these stories. Unfortunately, when the general public hears only about bad incidents happening around them, they develop a pessimistic attitude towards life. They start to build trust issues and begin to feel unsafe even inside their homes when they are alone. Apart from this, they lose faith in their government's security workers and start thinking that they are doomed. This is bad because the world is not a bad place.
However, the media cannot overlook bad news. Media is the voice of the public and as such it is their duty to highlight the problems plaguing society. Only then will the authorities wake up and do something to eradicate the problems troubling the citizens because of criminals. Besides, with such spreading of information, news channels can ensure to take adequate safety precautions before these issues resolve permanently. In the meanwhile, positive news should get adequate attention because it is important for newspapers and televisions to show and channels the stories of courage, fortitude, ambition, and achievements. Such stories will motivate people and encourage them to strive hard to achieve their goals.
To conclude, media should not ignore any news whether it is positive or negative. The general public should be aware of the happenings around them whether they are good or bad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... these stories. Unfortunately, when the general public hears only about bad incidents happenin...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...whether it is positive or negative. The general public should be aware of the happenings aroun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, however, if, look, so, then, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29429429429 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67217325023 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7625932079 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7894736842 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101085555565 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317846726701 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295213992961 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619068960736 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017890657181 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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