Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
In this globalized world, a sudden increase in production leads to abundance of waste that is one of the serious threat for health and safety of the public. I agree that government is doing best to manage this problem but there is the need to revise waste rules so that proper usage of recycle material can be done.
To begin with, there are a couple of reasons for waste production out of which the most concerning facts is use of eatery in public places as well as transportation. For instance, while travelling , i had observed wrappers and shells of fruits that occurs as a result of population growth. Secondly, installation of lot of industries to enhance production is also a leading cause of generation of useless substances. Finally, it is also seen that so much eatable material is being wasted in public events like marriages , parties especially in india. However, it seems that non -biogradable material is increasing the risk of pollution and spread of diseases that directly influence the health .
Moving further, no doubt that government already had taken steps to handle this worst threat on international basis. Currently, waste management rules are in practice and for its implications colour coded dustbins are available and even garbage buses are working to collect it safely. but in my opinion a lot of such efforts are required in underdeveloped and developing countries such as india. Law Official should have to revise the management rules and for disobeying strict penalties to be given.For example standardized degradation rules and methods to be planned for factories.
In conclusion, in my perspective it is an urgent need of society to take active steps to control spreading hazardous material otherwise so many resources need to be used in other sectors like health care and environment sanitation that could hamper the economic growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12745098039 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91160715891 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1247255985 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0411833066289 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0163801980363 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350055174718 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0302424179905 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415633860837 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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