Preservation of culture and traditions is a most trending topic in today's world. Most people think that young children are not aware about their culture and traditions. I give nod to their view and regards it as a negative development. This essay will deal with the causes, consequences and remedies for this.
To begin with, culture and traditions bind the person with their roots, as they are the reference point of one's identity. Decline in the interest among the younger generation is a worrisome development, leading to the unpredictable ramifications. First and foremost reason behind this is the upbringing of the child. Due to formal education, they are detached from traditional methods of learning such as story telling by the elders, thus, creating a gap of learning. Secondly, globalization has changed the way of thinking, people are more curious to know about other cultures than their own and wishing to adopt them as they consider their own traditions outdated.
Moving further, as roots are necessary for the development of tree so does the culture and traditions for human beings. Ignoring them not only leads them to oblivion but also deprive them of the heritage they have. Norms of culture are developed with many evolutions that their ancestors go through in their life. Generally, they explain the way of living the life in the best possible way at particular place or country. Culture bind them together and arouse the sense of belonging. Leaving once culture will ommit their existence and they have to develop a new one which may or may not suits their life. Greek philosophy states that to wipe out a particular community just break their contact with their culturr. Warnings have already started emerging, suicidal tedency in kids, hoplessness and depression, are few early signs of it.
In conclusion, from all the drawbacks, one thing is clear, there will be no future without preserving our culture and traditions. In order to make our future generations strong, motivated and courageous, they must know about their glorious past. Respect for their culture will help them to gain respect from the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ots, as they are the reference point of ones identity. Decline in the interest among...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11965811966 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69840428829 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0189006682 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.85 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17130059525 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547659240558 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498345030768 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121732499574 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427940823292 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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