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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society. How can this problem be solved
Food scientist discovered that obesity is one of the great consequences of health problems. Some Examples of the health problems are kidney failure, dyspnea, and hypertension. However on a daily basis people are still admitted in the hospital because of overweight. This essay will discuss the reason for he growth in overweight in the society and how the problem can be solved.
One of the major reason of overweight is increase consumption of sugary and fatty foods or drinks. Most individuals consume about 1,500 calories a day. Meals that contains fats always contribute to excess deposition of fat in our body system. Furthermore, lack of physical exercises is also one of the reasons of obesity. After accumulating such large amount of fats in the body system, one is suppose to do some exercise. At least, twice a day . Precisely morning and evening, this will help such individual burn some calories in the body.
Nevertheless, this problems can be solved by creating awareness on the dangers of obesity. The government should organize seminars, workshops and door to door lectures on the dangers of obesity. The lecturers should emphasize on the diseases and health problems that can occur as a result of excessive consumption of fatty And sugary foods. For example, in central hospitals in Nigeria, the health care centers, Nurses Health educate Pregnant women and breast feeding mothers on the dangers of obesity to the body and ways it can be prevented. Finally, Government should place taxes on sugary drinks and fatty foods. This will reduce the availability of the meal for individuals to consume.
In conclusion, overweight poses a serious health problems to people and it should be prevented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, still, at least, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15770609319 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79948747131 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544802867384 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6805096016 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9444444444 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330713009256 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966848287835 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116351899354 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242202184649 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130713635358 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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