Obesity is a growing problem in most of the countries. On average, weight of
people is increasing in many countries. This essay will discuss the reasons of
growing obesity and solutions to prevent it.
Consumption of unhealthy food items is surprisingly being overlooked in the
society. Because people do not have time to prepare healthy meals in their
fast moving lives, they are left with no choice, but to eat junk food. In United
Kingdom, for example, as per the survey conducted by Stephen Hawking, a
Professor in Metropolitan University, every 9 out of 10 people tend to eat
unhealthy meals because of their hectic routines. Although, the consumption
of unhygenic cuisines has immensely contributed in obesity among people in
different parts of the world, lack of physical activity is considered a major
factor as well. People with almost no physical activity are more likely to
become overweight than the one who actively follow a healthy lifestyle. For
these reasons, unhealthy food consumptions and limited physical activities is
making people excessively fat.
In order to control the increasing weight, healthy foods must be encouraged
and promoted among the society. Governments of different countries must
take the initiative and come up with a plan of highlighting the benefits of
healthy eating. For example, a marketing campaign can be launched globally
outlining the drawbacks of unhealthy food. Moreover, heavy taxes should be
imposed on fast food restaurants to discourage the society for consuming
unhealthy eateries. This can play an important role in declining the obesity
rate among different parts of the world.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that unhealthy diet and less active lifestyle are
the main cause in increasing weight among majority of the countries; but it
can be prevented by promoting healthy lifestyle and imposing heavy taxes on
unhygenic food items.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87741491553 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3396105357 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942014038034 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036233190834 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029490010467 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0272637289588 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382816083345 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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