The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create ? What are some solutions ?
Undoubtedly, in this world of stiff competition many old individuals strive against youngsters for employment. The principal problem this causes is that they often lose battle against young job seekers so they remain unemployed or work on low wages and the most viable solution would be to continuously upgrade their working skills in order to keep them in job hunt.
The major problem associated with competing against freshers for gray population is that they are less likely to grab that opportunity, because of their deteriorating health and lack of technological skills. It is a well-known fact that hiring companies often give preference to young graduates over aged people as they are more adapted with technology thereby can perform work efficiently and present a long-term prospect to the company. Therefore, in spite of having better experience and qualifications mostly old job seekers face job denial, if not, have to work on lower salaries compared with youngsters. This situation is traumatizing and can fall them prey to depression and other psychological problems.
To tackle this predicament government and companies need to work in synergy. Government on the one hand should launch skill update programs both for employed and unemployed aged people in which they can get required training about advanced working methods and cutting edge technology. Organisations on the other hand should co-operate with government and allow employees to update themselves by attending such programs so that they don't have to compete with anyone in later part of their lives. Also, companies need to follow impartial and qualification based hiring criteria without any bigotry or prejudice with old aspirants.
To conclude, older people are most likely to lose their ground to young candidates while competing for the same job due to their less familiarity with technology, however, this problem can be addressed through providing them adequate training regarding latest working techniques.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48220064725 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89739276699 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7772466486 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199292661545 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765673697633 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027488576011 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124752976983 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351351551717 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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