People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes, and how to overcome it?
Everyone is aiming to maintain a proper balance between his or her personal and professional life, however, only a few can do that. This essay intends to analyze the reasons behind such a tendency and would state some reliable solutions. This essay will firstly discuss one's responsibility to look after a family as a reason and secondly, an analysis of proper financial planning as a solution; followed by an effective confusion.
It becomes an extremely difficult situation for any earning person when they are liable to fulfill their dependents' financial needs, especially in many developing countries. The statistics report by the Times magazine stated that 45% to 60% of working people work during overtime in order to meet their economic requirements, for example. This situation has become worse since last couple of years when the world's inflation rate has raised gradually. As a result, men and women are working as if they are machines and trying to maintain a balance between the office and house.
One of the effective solutions to satisfy everyone's desire in life is to do effective money management. Recently, Pabrai groups had conducted a survey of many professionals and concluded that 43% of people are satisfied with the work and lives, and out of that, 95% of people were doing their financial planning regularly. A good financial management can generate a passive source of income. Therefore, one would not be needed to work for a longer hours, so they will be able to spend a good quality time with their family members.
To conclude, even though a monetary need is the cause of imbalance in work and life, a wise investor does not let affect his or her private and working life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...rse since last couple of years when the worlds inflation rate has raised gradually. As...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71673596633 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4814772458 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171867765154 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566271781975 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626333480947 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914867654271 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360109285587 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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