People no longer use newspapers and television because The Internet plays the same role as them.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Internet nowadays has a big impact on every peoples' lives. People in all ages are fund of using this especially younger generation. That is why using newspapers and television are being forgotten as a source of information or entertainment since internet offers the same. I do disagree that newspapers and television are being set aside due to the internet.
We all know that internet is the most popular trend in worldwide. People use it for entertainment, source of news and information to make them up to date because it is easy to access through laptops, personal computers, tablets, and mobile phones. Like a full-time employee is at work, he or she can easily be updated with latest news or trending topics through his or her mobile phone because they can access internet.
As of now only limited of people us newspapers and television, however, both are good sources of information and entertainment too. In fact, it has the most reliable information and most up to date compared to internet. Although it is not handy as the other, people should still use this often. Because one of the advantages of it is to make bond or get together with love ones and family. Very good example is, watching television with parents to finish a long day comparing to internet a person access it alone most of the time.
Therefore, newspapers and television should still be valued as the internet. Even if these source of information and entertainment are not easy to access it still most reliable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87843137255 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82270140365 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537254901961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.640678576 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232600084802 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883933008068 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639792573764 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149023252518 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812255877122 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.