It is believed that culture and tradition are lost when it is exposed for earning money. However, others believe it important part of promotion. Discuss and give your opinion.
ANSWER:
Culture and tradition are always be the foundation of every country but for todays generation, due to the mandatory of having more money to provide every people's desires and needs for their living this foundation are becoming less essential. But some people still acknowledge its importance and consider this as the key of success. In my opinion, solid belief in culture and tradition should still be present even if the demand for money is rising because this can be used as benefit.
To start up with, the greed for money is highly increasing because of the changes of the world today. Like in most countries,they get their funds from tourism to raise more money for the growth of it. However, the government have not seen the negative impact of foreign tourist to its local people and environment. Instead, they kept on advertising their country to the rest of the world and not considering to preserve their own since people tend to copy other cultures and traditions and easily influence by others.
On the other hand, culture and tradition must be used to attract tourism to gain more money to its country. With this way, the essence of culture and tradition is still intact and present to its origin. Through this many locals will have more employment and opportunities to work so they can contribute to its nation's development. Good example for this is Japan. As we all know that Japan has one of the most advance technology in the world and has a high economic growth, however, their culture and tradition is still present and strong despite of western culture influence and exposure.
In conclusion, I believe that culture and tradition should not be set aside since they are proven as strong source of income by using it wisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 34, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Line 8, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
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Line 8, column 397, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering preserving'.
Suggestion: considering preserving
...ountry to the rest of the world and not considering to preserve their own since people tend to copy oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53831746548 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.891837471 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203052819592 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075547073181 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390923743284 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129589548825 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129644428095 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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