People now have the freedom to work and live anwhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Humans are at their liberty to search a job and stay at any place on the globe owing to advancement in technological knowledge and transportation system. From my perspective, I think that such a trend attracts more merits compared to any demerits it might bring. My thoughts are narrated comprehensively in forthcoming paragraphs.
Despite a few minor drawbacks in the following paragraph, I consider that benefits gained by possibilities to work and stay in any country are extremely useful. An evident benefit is decrement in unemployment. Since individuals are able to communicate with each part of the universe by internet connection, the chances of getting a job has improved to a large level. Moreover, variety in work is another significant positive aspect. Even, with increase in the number of airports and ports, citizens are easily able to move in any country. These migrants are able to work with different types of jobs like farming, fishing and construction.
Admittedly, there are few simple drawbacks with working and living in different countries. One basic issue is cyber crime. With development in information technologies, several offensive activities, such as robbery in bank accounts and fraud by credit and debit cards has increased to a huge extent. There are also case of not paying money after getting the work done through online freelancing websites like www.freework.com. In addition, Competition is another negative aspect to be considered. With many people shifting in any developed country, the population will go in increasing. Consequently, there will be more people for less number of jobs in that particular area like Sydney of Australia.
In conclusion, an increase in employment and availability of different work far outweighs any of the disadvantages such as crime in cyber field and competition that could result from getting liberty to work and settle in any part of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...like farming, fishing and construction. Admittedly, there are few simple drawbac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31045751634 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16490403334 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6410287248 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126110772957 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339959786838 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359477741234 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729915633929 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416662077305 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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