People nowadays are not fit and active than the people from the olden days. Discuss the causes of this situation and suggest some possible solutions
Physical fitness is one of the most vital daily routine and same has to be followed by everyone. However, as compare to older generation, these days people are not bothered to take fitness seriously. The following paragraphs would elucidate possible reasons for the problems and propose a handful of remedial measures.
In order to stay fit, one has to donate some time towards physical fitness, however due to long working hours, these days, people are not inclined towards the exercise. After working for more than 10 hours, individuals are so exhausted that they prefer to spend time with their family members rather than going out for exercise. Previously, people used to eat healthy food which was helpful to stay healthy and disease free, whereas in the contemporary era, most of the individuals are more inclined towards the junk food and hence they get prone to various diseases such as obesity, high blood pressure, stress, and muscular strains.
Undoubtedly, every lock has a key. Similarly, some solutions should be implemented. Government should pass a bill under which no organization should be allowed to operate their employees for more than 8 hours so that everyone can get some time for their fitness. As per the study, a physically fit employee is more productive as in comparison to lethargic. A source of food also plays an important role when it comes to fitness. People who prefer to follow healthy and plant based diet are more active in their daily routines.
To recapitulate, I would like to state that every individual should put their best foot forward in order to curb down the menace. They should follow fitness rigorously because this will help them to improve their immune system. Just for a taste change, people can have street food, however they should never ignore exercise as their daily routine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, similarly, so, whereas, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06557377049 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52917191224 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.766091341 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163617725482 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556307184413 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427190628237 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982031209802 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192313178746 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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