The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
Of late, internet has been a prevailing concern in significant part of the world. A sea change has been witnessed considering the methods using which, an information is being distributed and used. The following paragraph would elucidate possible reasons for the problems and propose a handful of remedial measures.
These days internet is available everywhere as such in home networks and mobile devices. Due to easy access, children are being addicted towards video games. They easily download games from internet and spend hours by playing the same without involving themselves in physical activities. This issue causes them different diseases and one of those is Obesity. Cyber bullying is another problem which is being observed these days. As per the recent survey conducted by Cyber department of information technology, USA, teenagers from different Nations are being harassed through cyber bullying and this is all happening due to unmonitored access of internet.
As we know that every small piece of information is available on internet, hence, one should always try to gather positive contents. There are many channels which enhance our knowledge in terms of fitness. Parents should encourage their children to browse such subscribers to the understand the importance of fitness in daily life. In the world of advanced technologies, social networking is on peak. It is a mutual responsibility of parents and teachers to update children that they should not allow strangers to contact them through this virtual gateway. Parents should monitor their children web activities so that they can safeguard them from cyber bullying.
In conclusion, in today’s fast paced world more and more people are using internet to get the information they need. This essay discussed, how children are being addicted towards video games and cyber bullying is common due to unmonitored access of internet. and This essay also suggested that solutions to this problems are twofold. One of them is parents engagements to make children updated about the importance of exercise and also they should monitor the web activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...andful of remedial measures. These days internet is available everywhere as suc...
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Line 9, column 277, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... children to browse such subscribers to the understand the importance of fitness in daily life...
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Line 13, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...due to unmonitored access of internet. and This essay also suggested that solution...
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Line 13, column 314, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... essay also suggested that solutions to this problems are twofold. One of them is pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43373493976 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77761638456 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4408986654 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9473684211 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05263157895 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133871346187 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422526716277 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416646746017 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877655654341 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350430995245 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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