People should work a fixed number or hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this.
Employees should have a fixed number of hours per week, and employers should not ask their employees to work mote than that. Concerned to this, I do both agree and disagree. Agree, because company or business persons must think of their employees too, think of their employees that they worked for their family and they must have a fixed time for work so that they can manage their time. However, I disagree also because as a worker must follow on what the company's policy, there will be a time that you need to have overtime to finish your work.
I do agree that people should have a fixed time for work, like what I stated on the first part, all employees or people work for their family, like me. For example, if we dont have fixed time for work, we cant manage our time wisely. If we have fixed time or hours for work we can designate and know what are the things that we must do. Although I agree, I do disagree also to the point that employers should not ask for more time. In my opinion, for example if there is a problem and we did not finish our paper works in time, we need to have or to go overtime to finish all of those things, even if it was ask by our manager or not. We need to finish our worked first for us to stay and have a good impressions to others.
In conclusion, it is still a case to case basis. I do agree that workers should have fixed hours for work, and still employers can ask more time if they can compensate the overtime. I do disagree also because if you can still work for more hours, you can have it as long as you want and it is paid. Therefore if your company already did not take or do their part as an employer, we have organization that can give us help in case of having problems to our work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eir family, like me. For example, if we dont have fixed time for work, we cant manag...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...if we dont have fixed time for work, we cant manage our time wisely. If we have fixe...
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Line 3, column 609, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'asked'.
Suggestion: asked
...ish all of those things, even if it was ask by our manager or not. We need to finis...
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Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'impression'?
Suggestion: impression
...ed first for us to stay and have a good impressions to others. In conclusion, it is stil...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'longs'?
Suggestion: longs
...work for more hours, you can have it as long as you want and it is paid. Therefore i...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... it as long as you want and it is paid. Therefore if your company already did not take or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16272189349 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11610448297 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402366863905 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9331593261 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294767916175 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134196564998 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135570943339 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218892851085 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436731053816 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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