People who read for pleasure have better imagination and language skills than those who prefer watching TV. To what extent do you agree?
Reading is an indispensable part of civilized society. It’s been long debated that people who prefers to read has higher imaginative and language skills than those who only follow television. I believe, reading habit has more benefits in long run.
To begin with, I agree reading aids a person with enhanced mental skills. A book reader has to imaging each and every detail portraited by the writer and remember all of those minute details right till its end to better understand the content. Also, language plays a vital role failing which we will not be able to understand granular details of the scene, which is very crucial especially in climax. A study by Oxford University suggested that people who continue their reading habit in old age are less prone to mental illness like Dementia, Alzheimer, etc, because their brain is fully active and engross while reading, which eventually slows the degradation of neural cells.
On the other hand, most of our populous are inclined towards TV wherein no mentally exhausting activity is required. An individual must sit in front of the idiot box and enjoy the experience. All the scenes become alive on the screen like a cooked meal in which no effort is required to understand the content and it can be viewed wherever we are comfortable. For instance, it’s been observed that people who are always engrossed with television are not only mentally unfit but are physically unfit, too, being a couch potato.
To conclude, individuals who are into reading have alert mind because they have to convert words into picture, thereby their neurons are always firing, and they have good command over language. While, TV watchers must watch it, which is completely passive activity which requires least mental alertness. To my mind, readers have higher imaginative and a strong language skills. These skills are blessing in disguise in their old age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 272, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'requires the least'.
Suggestion: requires the least
...ch is completely passive activity which requires least mental alertness. To my mind, readers h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, as to, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11146496815 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53847827691 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627388535032 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1523576026 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266462149237 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772060130637 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915290486318 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164803351926 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909006417478 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.