As the population of the world growingvery quickly, the only long term solution to the problem of overpopulation is for human to settle other planets.
What benefit has the world got from the world exploration?
Do you think humans will live on other planets.
It has been suggested that owing to booming population in the present decade, the only longterm answer for this ever increasing people is accommodating populace on other planest. However, this essay will discuss the advantages of inspection on space and do really individuals prefer to reside on distance planets.
There are innumerable merits associated if the space could be explored.First and foremost, it would contribute to the metrology department to transmit informations about the other planets movement, which facilitates to forecast the accurate weather,as a result, it enables to take rigid measures in order to avoid catastrophes to inhabitants from the asteroid.For instance,in 1992 the Americam scientists were capable to determind that pluto earth was rapidly moving than the average speed and it may cause detrimental effects to the earth and therefore the government innitiated all the necessity requirements to save the lives of people.
In addition, by investigation of hevenley body able to identify novel substances, which definitely useful to manufacture numerous molecules inorder to nurse chronic diseases.Even though it is hard task to conduct researches on major planets,scientists did not proven unmanageable to absorb unique data.As long as authorities inject a large amount of money to implement more examinations on stars, people would not cnfront any dificultiess to survive in the earth and thus it it too inevitable to continue ample of researches.
However, it is not uncommon that populace prefer to occupy on asteorid, as long as their equiped withh all the sophisticated resources.In the contemporary earth mankind facing enormous issues due to overcrowding and thus tribe likely to advantage from other globes to fulfill there esteem needs.
In conclusion, the aforementioned anecdotal evidence precisely justified inmortance of space survey but also the human presents in other planets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23084004088 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.701019131 49.4020404114 396% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 274.833333333 106.682146367 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.5 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6666666667 7.06120827912 279% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152899191461 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785503574155 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364290658807 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836471300277 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455911568793 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.84 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.15 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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