Recently in several nations, the number of young people is higher than older people. Young people can work hard, and they have more technological knowledge over older people, therefore, working longer hours at work would be easier for young employees than older ones in the workplace. This is to say that the advantages of having more young society members outweigh the drawbacks.
Juveniles are the most paramount citizens in each society because they are powerful enough to handle the majority of work in different fields and various scenarios without exhaustion. This means that many organizations try to recruit more youth rather than old staff since they have more ability to work faster and accurately than older adults. For example, they can undertake the longer hours shift and they can take the night shift to up and running the company operation without losing work quality compared to older employees. Younger employees have higher physical power and good health situations therefore, the efficiency of work would be superior which leads to an economic boost in a broader range.
Talking about disadvantages, if a community is built full of old people, younger people must contribute more hours at work compared to older staff which means, young people would have longevity at work and it can cause brain drain. This can lead young people towards migration options, they would look for other countries to move to where they can have a higher job satisfaction rate with lower living expenses. This whole situation would be negative for the country where there are more older people living compared to young people.
In conclusion, I tend to say that having more young humans is beneficial to society because they can have higher economical and industrial roles, which is beneficial for older people in nations as a whole.
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor bike To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
- Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 73
- As computers translate quickly and accurately learning foreign languages is a waste of time To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
...egative for the country where there are more older people living compared to young people....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49011155484 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513333333333 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2864455133 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.272727273 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17371876315 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889097930366 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063379219538 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122095988494 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747860991667 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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