Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 254 words.
It is argued that having a single career option in life is the thing of past, while nowadys, people majorly focus on adopting multiple career goals that can bring more money and wealth. However, I do not agree with this notion and believe that focusing on one goal is far more advantageous than exploring the several career paths. In the following paragraphs , I will explain my opinion in detail.
To embark on, keeping one important goal can bring abundant prosperity in life. For this, individuals firstly need to acquire formal education along with this, they have to show full potential,dedication, perseverance and hard work to fulfil it. Though, engaging in multiple career goals do not end up with an excellent outcome, moreover, it brings distraction and leads to distruption of each task. Therfore, focus on one career goal is more fruitful for achieving success.
Contrary to this, some people argued that indulging in various jobs and choosing several options in life possess more economy and maintain financial security. However, this trend is being followed by those people especially enterpreneurs and those who have minimal education level and still want to earn well. But requiring formal education in different fields with one background is impossible or difficult, beacuse there is a particular standard of education which cannot be altered.
To conclude, undoubtedly, single career path in life is in more trendy today to achieve success, as it has bright future prospect , also, it leads to the development of nation. However, I believe, considering multiple options in life may not be beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87434737832 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5611798381 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220341714637 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771649400664 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387395232693 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12987906109 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439329990749 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.