“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.
To what extent do you agree.
Advancements in the field of science and medicine and social awareness towards physical health are encouraging investments towards preventive healthcare. While it is increasingly possible to prevent diseases using proactive measures but there will always be a need of people requiring medical treatment in situations where prevention does not work or is not possible. This essay will discuss why disease treatment is also important along with increasing investment in preventive measures.
‘Prevention is better than cure’ is an age old adage. Healthcare has greatly advanced with years of investments and research in this field across the globe. As a result medical world has started moving from reactive to proactive healthcare. For example: In last decade, India has been successful in eradicating polio completely from the country. Government conducts polio vaccination drives across the country for children due to which they can never get infected with polio for life. Preventive measures like this are immensely effective as they not only save a lot of healthcare cost but also keep population healthy.
Although preventive healthcare is the best medication approach it cannot address all the medical problems. For example, there are health problems like cancer which cannot be prevented by medication or vaccination. They are the result of today’s fast moving lifestyle and hence in a way inevitable. For these reasons, investments and research in treatment based medication needs to continue at least for foreseeable future.
In conclusion, preventive measures are the most preferred approach towards healthcare and there is a growing need to make further investments to advance and research in this field. However, they cannot completely replace treatment based medication. Hence Healthcare world should strike the right balance and make investments and advancements in both the areas in right proportion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72068965517 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01954788688 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2540847492 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229378920514 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775362025236 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891691441691 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134061336058 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426911194894 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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