Prison is the best punishment for criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, there are many articles talking about incredible rising in crime and how to punish. Personally, I think prison is the best penalty for criminals.
First of all, for the majority of crimes, they are appropriate to being in jail. Mainly so that the victim would be safe from further harm. Take a murder as an example. He should not have chance to kill or harm someone else because he has been given capital punishment.
Secondly, I completely agree with this statement is that a number of inmates are actually a danger to society. A typical example of this is violating in a particular family. The sufferers are able children and women who are lack of protection and support from communities while the offender is their father or husband. In this case, if the offender has his freedom, he easily tends to commit violation again. Thus, prison sends out a strong message to people who are thinking about committing a crime in the future.
On the other hand, some people argue that taking away one's freedom is just about the worst thing can do to a human. Prisons are likely to become "the schools of crime" where offenders can easily end with others to re-offend. Eating, sleeping and doing activities together might create criminal friendship in jail. This probably leads to a bad result that they will leave police behind and secretly carry out a plot to break the law.
To sum up, letting lawbreakers receiving prison is strict discipline, but it is necessary to keep society being safer from an illegal act
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, i think, talking about, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8288973384 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53605041486 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673003802281 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0004557257 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.375 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196348246001 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543291508636 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565765974472 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895433710745 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052230891847 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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