It is undeniable fact that technology has entered all the sectors, food industry is being no exception. This is having several positive factors considering the time and preparation at the same time few believe that this has led to lack of nutrition and adulteration of food. In my opinion technology in food sector has more disadvantage than advantage.
Firstly every individuals need healthy food for his survival, more the nutritious food more the productivity of the individual. Health issues of an individual can be certainly curtailed by consuming healthy food and following healthy diet. Technology shall provide us variety and tasty food, but fails to provide the nutritious food. As it goes through several process leading to lack of protein and nutrients content in food. Food processed through machine shall have several chemicals to have a long lasting life as they are packed in containers.
Further to that the side effects of consuming adulterated food has many consequence and may lead to organ disorder. Hence on several products processed by machines have an expiry date and contents specification. As per the recent research the average consumption of nutritiou
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...fe as they are packed in containers. Further to that the side effects of consuming a...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun consequence seems to be countable; consider using: 'many consequences'.
Suggestion: many consequences
...fects of consuming adulterated food has many consequence and may lead to organ disorder. Hence o...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...equence and may lead to organ disorder. Hence on several products processed by machin...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...expiry date and contents specification. As per the recent research the average con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32978723404 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91611637655 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2724242407 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0909090909 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127256931892 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497546932885 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300254575176 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862333624401 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399012789039 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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