Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families, this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Due to modernization and nuclear family trend, people these days find their comfort in being alone or with selective people as compared to earlier days. Even in today's world there are several people who feels secured and comfort with family members and small faction finds privacy and happiness by being either isolated or they prefer staying with their friends. In this essay will discuss about both the sides.
In the early days, most of the people led a good social life than today. As they never used any mobiles or other form of indirect communication, majorly used to have face to face. This had led to the dependency, bonding and closeness among-st family members. For instance, every family member once they returned to home, they preferred to sit together and have dinner without any external interruption such as mobile or television. They used to discuss their days activities and care for each other.
On the other hand, gadgets have made us to lead an isolated life. There are several instance where people carry work to home and continue their work at home on laptop. This has resulted in low social life with least interference with family members. In some other case teenagers find a kind of family feeling amongst friends. As they are not judgmental and strict with their opinion and thoughts. Resultingly they get closer with friends and starts moving far from family members. This has several negative impact and this is not a new phenomenon, its been followed from ages. Hence I agree that there is a need to balance among friends and family by providing required time and attention for overall development and better future.
To summarise, I agree that it is always good to stay and spend quality time with family members by understanding each other with minimum privacy. As family stays forever with us during all odd times. Friends do have a vital role, however balance is required for good social life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun instance seems to be countable; consider using: 'several instances'.
Suggestion: several instances
... us to lead an isolated life. There are several instance where people carry work to home and con...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'instances'?
Suggestion: instances
...ead an isolated life. There are several instance where people carry work to home and con...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
...p. This has resulted in low social life with least interference with family members. In so...
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Line 5, column 578, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...henomenon, its been followed from ages. Hence I agree that there is a need to balance...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ways good to stay and spend quality time with family members by understanding eac...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...anding each other with minimum privacy. As family stays forever with us during all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, for instance, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92048929664 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37828099323 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5117075976 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6842105263 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246681200879 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077827505338 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522034376949 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157170141019 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559409125351 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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