Some people buy local products while others prefer international products. Do you agree or disagree?
Today world is considered as Global village as all the hurdles have been removed to the possible extent for improved trade and commerce between the countries, and has increased import of international good tremendously, however few people consider purchase of local products, as they feel it is more economical and easily accessible. I firmly emphasis on buying local products as there is certainly advantage to the growth and development of economy of the country.
There are several arguments which supports the purchase of domestic manufactured goods, for instance it helps to make use of resources at an economical price, available within the local vicinity. Secondly it helps to create employment opportunity to the local youth and improves the standard of living of the people. Finally it helps to curtail the outflow of foreign currency and improves Forex Reserves. Recently India has become the world second highest manufacturer of steel and able to full fill the steel demand of the country. This had led to development of Country as a whole.
On the Contrary, few individuals consider that international products are reliable and durable for longer time and it is considered as status symbol and are usually flaunted among friends and family. The packing of the products are really appreciable, even though they have been shipped from several miles away, the product stays quite intact and safe till it reaches the delivery point. The technology and quality of the products are comparatively better than local product as machines used will be advanced. Hence in certain circumstance purchase of international goods is advisable.
I hereby conclude that, even though international products are long lasting, still preference and opportunity should be provided to local products and encourage domestic sales and make sure the domestic standards are matching with International standards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, really, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41694915254 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89080007593 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3391398557 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.166666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199119539993 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063683006444 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528668634191 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121570069251 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527681114218 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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