Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Currently there is a contentious argument that whether the developed countries should allow employment of skilled workforce from poor countries or not. I totally agree that the developed countries should allow skilled employees from poor countries to work in developed countries.
Developed countries would be able to get skilled workforce that could contribute to the development and further advancement of the nation without spending on their education expenses. Since, the workforce would be already educated so they would not have to invest on the employee training. Therefore, employers might be able to hire employees who have years of professional experience and thus it would be a win-win situation for both. For instance, developed countries like New Zealand recently invited applicants for citizenship on the basis of skills shortage list where they enlisted the professions that are required for the economic growth of their country. Plumbers, engineers, doctors, nurses and pediatrician were some of the listed professions who were invited. This has caused immense economic growth of the country in last seven years.
On the contrary, others argue that it would make developed countries overcrowded and their own citizens might remain jobless. However, I disagree with this viewpoint. There are many developed countries where certain provinces still lack skilled workforce. Allowing people from poor countries would not only increase the revenue but would even create more jobs as such workforce would be more enthusiastic and better equipped to create more revenue with their years of experience and job expertise.
In conclusion, I reiterate that experienced workforce is the strength of a nation. When such workforce gets a conductive environment than they can not only work towards their own betterment but can also bring about economic growth of the whole nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 724, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
..., doctors, nurses and pediatrician were some of the listed professions who were invited. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53979238754 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79782981577 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3506447799 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242618228865 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885609018893 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083161597402 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153829811748 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104564951891 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.