School teachers are more accountable for the social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is argued that academic teachers have greater responsibility in enabling comprehensive development including cognitive and behavioral skills of youngsters rather than parents and guardians. I completely agree with this view as children spend most of their time at school which also provides a conducive learning environment to coach and mold their character.
Some argue that parents can have a significant impact on children as they have a lenient relationship and better rapport with them. The informal environment at home empowers young kids to learn skills without any inhibitions. Also, they spend more time observing their parent in social situations than their teachers and inculcate these habit subconsciously. Additionally, while the teacher's main focus might be in imparting knowledge and covering all subjects included in the curriculum, parents are more interested in helping their offspring achieve holistic development ranging from social to cognitive skills.
However, I believe that owing to the innumerable hours students clock at school, teachers inherently impacted them to a great extent. They not only look up to their teachers for their day to day learning tasks but all view them as role models. Their behavior, attitude and interactions with other students is keenly observed by teachers and corrected which will define their personality as they grow. For example, while playing sports at school, the coach guides students not only to hone their physical skills essential for the sport but also teaches them aspects of being a good sportsman like camaraderie, being a team player and so on. These are traits that students carry forward to their adult life driving an individual's success.
In conclusion, although it is irrefutable that parents have a significant impact on overall development of their offspring, we would be remiss not to consider the positive influence made by school teachers on the holistic development of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this habit' or 'these habits'?
Suggestion: this habit; these habits
...tions than their teachers and inculcate these habit subconsciously. Additionally, while the...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...ously. Additionally, while the teachers main focus might be in imparting knowledge and cov...
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Line 5, column 717, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... forward to their adult life driving an individuals success. In conclusion, although it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, for example, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49342105263 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90935305181 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588815789474 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4486749666 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186841194062 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722189420925 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044337201681 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116865896078 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145365708242 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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