Science will soon make people live up to 100 or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the advancement in technology on medical science the life expectancy has increased over years. we have already achieved an average age of 65, which will be even more in later part of our lives.It has been believed that we can surpass the age barrier of 100 years and may extend our lifetime to many more.In this essay we will discuss the effects of longevity as human in future.
A long healthy life will have many benefits which can be divided into three stages of our period.Firstly, career wise it should help us in achieving more as more work can be done without limiting ourselves to the retirement issues and also aviailibilty of more time. Secondly, we would be able to give more time to our families, engage with our children , grandchildren, close loved ones which in turn makes us happy and we can share the knowledge which we have amassed in lifetime to our offsprings.Lastly time can be our friend and we would pursue our dreams which were mostly lost in the midst of daily hassle of life.
Although it seems a happy place but the adverse consequnces are there which may impact more severly than we can think of. In recent times families are becoming nuclear in nature and people dont want to take care of elderly and are thrown in old age homes. More people will be needed to take care of old person and iy may create a grave problem as not many people want these jobs.With increased life expectancy more resources like food,shelter and daily needs will be in high demand and to fulfil these needs will server major roadblocks for goverment.
In conclusion this could prove as a double edged sword which may cut both ways indiciduals can achive more in their life span while they may have to fight for other basic neeccessaties whcih will becae a scarcity in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66246056782 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51290722893 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.069574769 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.75 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.625 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998820886808 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485621137775 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357558768247 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741785457688 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037683114199 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.