Earth is a home to every Living Being on it and hence it is the responsibility of everyone to Take care of it. We use and carry out many activities which directly or indirectly Cosumes natural resources.
Many are already aware about the danger our environment is facing these day's. Natural resources like Land, water and Air have become limited and polluted and once exhausted there is scare chance of revival.
Many Individuals uses these resources in an unlimited way and they also assume that their minimum usuage will not make much difference to its scarcity. For example, Many Individuals just ignore the slow and Drop leakage of water from pipes ,or doesn't give importance to turn off the fab or power when not in use, thinking that these small activities may not help to protect environment.
Like how we all take care of every minute things in our own house similarly it is our combined responsibility as a individual to save and protect environment. Awareness Programme in school and village's should be conducted, Person harming the environment should be penalized.
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- In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. SOme people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years. But other people think everyone should have the freedom to choose where they work. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'use'.
Suggestion: use
...hance of revival. Many Individuals uses these resources in an unlimited way and...
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Line 6, column 39, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unlimited way" with adverb for "unlimited"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... Many Individuals uses these resources in an unlimited way and they also assume that their minimum...
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Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any Individuals just ignore the slow and Drop leakage of water from pipes ,or doe...
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Line 6, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ow and Drop leakage of water from pipes ,or doesnt give importance to turn off th...
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Line 6, column 246, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...d Drop leakage of water from pipes ,or doesnt give importance to turn off the fab or ...
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Line 8, column 114, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ly it is our combined responsibility as a individual to save and protect environm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, similarly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01657458564 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75527249291 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67955801105 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1620785927 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151028322739 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572863187664 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280962563386 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798843090392 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343280454542 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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