Medical technology helps to live long life. Is that curse or blessing for society and mankind?

People in earlier times used to lead a healthy and long life, as there was pure and unadulterated food, unpolluted and fresh air in the environment to breathe. The Average life span of a normal human being then used to around 95-100 years unlike in today's generation it is 80-85 years.

People now a days are falling ill at an very early stage of their life and are getting exposed to many harmful diseases. For example, A person at an age of between 40-50 are getting Uncurable disease like Cancer. Research and development in Medical field have helped to combat with such Diseases, otherwise mortality rate would have increased to a higher rate.

However, Living a long life with the help of a Medical technology can be a curse for people suffering from multiple diseases, physical and mental strain, undergoing pain on a daily Basis.

Life is a beautiful gift and everyone deserves to live happy and healthy and for as long as anyone desires.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...generation it is 80-85 years. People now a days are falling ill at an very early stage...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ration it is 80-85 years. People now a days are falling ill at an very early stage...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... People now a days are falling ill at an very early stage of their life and a...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... People now a days are falling ill at an very early stage of their life and are...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll at an very early stage of their life and are getting exposed to many harmful ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 20.9802955665 10% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 1207.87684729 65% => OK
No of words: 165.0 242.827586207 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78787878788 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52456071332 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 379.143842365 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2513281881 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.857142857 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286520729404 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117367068519 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107490155812 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180170048224 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10667569733 0.0609392437508 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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