Activities and lifestyle of a person depends a lot upon its adaptibility which is imibibed in a person since it's birth. The Lifestyle and habit also varies among the people of these two Scenario.
A Person who is born in a Hot and humid place gets adapted to that situation and perform all activities easliy as their body gets habituated to that lifestyle and they also perform activities suitable to hot climate for example Growing of Certain Vegetables and grains,Eating habits, way of dressing etc Similarly on the other hand people in Cold climate prefer and perform activities suitable to them as they are used to eat packed and stored food which is not easy for people from hot climate and they prefer eating fresh food. The day starts early due to early sunrise to the people from cold region and they perform all morning chores early on the other hand People from Hot region work till Late Dawn due to late sunset in those areas.
People do migrate from one place to another and hence from one kind of climate to another and they do face difficulty in the early stage to get adapted to new change but eventually as the times goes everyone habituated to a certain extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Eating
...Growing of Certain Vegetables and grains,Eating habits, way of dressing etc Similarly o...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to eating'.
Suggestion: used to eating
...activities suitable to them as they are used to eat packed and stored food which is not eas...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence from one kind of climate to another and they do face difficulty in the early...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, similarly, so, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65238095238 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36058430831 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.834001398 49.4020404114 322% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.4 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.2 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251963843397 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120023657468 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813996931434 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145004544939 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089416353944 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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