Since ages children are controlled by physical punishment.Some section of people tends to claim that corporal punishment is the best form of keep children under control.This essay will argue that smacking is not completely pefect way of discipline.
Physical punishment is concluded to discipline younger ones by some sections. Beating or hitting children may scare them from involved into negative activities.Some times being harsh may help a child from inclining to a bad side.Parents or teachers always help us to achieve best things in our career and best things comes with hardships.This may be the reason why children are smacked by their parents or teachers. From long ages , tradition of physical punishment is predominant and provide success in my cases.Michael Jackson father used to put ice on his eyes so that he doesnot sleep while practising dancing. All these instances tends to make a belief that smacking is the perfect way to control children.
Despite some critical situations, I feel smacking children is completely unauthentics and banned with immediate effect. Beating a child under situations may inflict a sense of fear which may take entire life time to recover. Parents try to keep a child away from being a nuisance by beating or if they felt fed up with their younger once.However, this completely destroyed their ability to question about situation and ultimately the main agenda of being a human.Many adults is interviewed and found that even in this age they suffer from low self confidence and scare to say something in louder voice. At last, I want to mention that physical abusing a child cannot and can never be a tool to discipline a child.
This essay argued that corporal punishment or abuse though believed by some people but it is completely unacceptable and inhuman that we put children through.In my opinion, smacking children is not at all supported despite some exceptional situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, while, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1847133758 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94750578887 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.937039392 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.8 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106133805552 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411180162292 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376949322144 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072527217091 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314080099777 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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