In some cities there are few controls over the designs of new houses, buildings and offices and people are able to build whatever style of houses they want. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this development?
Over the past few years, we have seen less control in the designs of buildings built-in certain cities. While there are advantages and disadvantages of this development, in my opinion, minimum rules certainly have more negatives than the positives. This essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks followed by the conclusion.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of constructing a house by own choice. Firstly, as there are no rules to follow, one can build as many floors as they want. However, this situation is rare, only happening in certain countries. Secondly, this can give a unique identity to the city as there will be more classic and modern designs blended together. People in Lahore, for example, are allowed to build houses as they please which has given it a different identity among other cities of Pakistan.
Nevertheless, despite the above advantages, I believe that this can bring more drawbacks to society. One potentially dangerous disadvantage is that it can lead to a rivalry between neighbours on building and showcasing a better house. Another obvious issue is not considering the impacts of natural disasters like the Earthquake on buildings. When people do not have any fear of the law, they will never invest in the safety aspects of construction. For instance, research done by the students of Punjab University states that, in 2005, more people died because of violating building safety codes during the disastrous Earthquake that shook the entire northern region.
To conclude, the disadvantages of building houses without sufficient control of authorities far outweigh any of the minor benefits that could result from having no restrictions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30111524164 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8593426827 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7621114908 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291515492756 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851351439331 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523329422894 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165420809533 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372646122768 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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