Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
As the world is becoming competitive, individuals need to prove their work skills from time to time. A lot of western countries encourage teenagers to take up part –time jobs whereas few percentage of countries tend to discourage this trend.
Working as a part timer definitely proves advantageous to every individual in their career life. Firstly, it helps in enhancing and developing necessary skill set for the teenagers such as communication, socialization, leadership and a lot more. Secondly, working as teenagers certainly contributes in the country’s economy. Since there is rise in working sector in return they spend as well. This surely increases GDP of the country. Finally working as part timers, youth can help their family financially. This will lead to very few poor people in the country.
On the other hand, few countries do not encourage this for teenagers. It is believed by them that at this age adolescents are immature and not ready to take on any responsibilities. It is deemed that teenagers should focus more in their studies and excel in sports rather than working since will help them in getting qualified in prestige colleges for higher studies.
In my opinion, It is definitely good idea to work in your teenage years since it helps you in gaining valuable experience. This will help them in shaping their future right and also getting ready to face challenges which they will certainly encounter in their later career life.
In conclusion, teenagers should be ready to face challenge and take on responsibilities which are necessary for their career life. Counties should start adopting this measure to help teenagers to develop right qualities and skills. Also government should try to make more part time jobs so that it is easier for them to work and not waste their time in looking for one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percentage seems to be countable; consider using: 'few percentages'.
Suggestion: few percentages
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...is surely increases GDP of the country. Finally working as part timers, youth can help ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... to develop right qualities and skills. Also government should try to make more part...
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Line 9, column 273, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...Also government should try to make more part time jobs so that it is easier for them to w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09570957096 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85895077575 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531353135314 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4937868532 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8235294118 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151951580799 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544476090459 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059294819448 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100633325742 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519920012161 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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