In some countries, if people need to find work, they have to move away from their families and their friends. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
It is true that in some parts of the world, people have to move away from their hometowns, where their parents and friends are living to look for better jobs. I consider this trend a negative movement.
On the one hand, I have to accept that there are benefits to living far away from parents and childhood friends. Firstly, people who do not have to live with their parents may find themselves more enjoyable and have more freedom. They obviously do not need to spend time looking after or talking to their parents daily, and they therefore have more quality time for themselves and relax. Secondly, they may find new friends and enjoy the advantages that these new friendships bring to them. For example, a friend of mine got married thanks to her choice to move to a bigger city for a new job after graduation.
At the same time, I believe that the negative sides of this trend outweigh its positive ones. People who get used to having parents around to take care of their daily meals and listen to their daily hardships may feel lonely and adopt unhealthy habits. For example, many people in my country choose to eat junk food or instant noodles when they stay in different provinces because they do not know how to cook a healthy dish or have friends to share meals with at high-end restaurants. Furthermore, living with parents means that people do not have to care about the housing bills, including electricity, gas, water, or internet. When people live alone, there will be economic pressure from these bills and rental fees, and many people suffer from depression after living by themselves.
In conclusion, in my view, the disadvantages of moving away from parents and friends are far more than the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40217262771 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543333333333 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.152954879 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378185458261 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125619526797 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806582835354 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237372700776 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447280467513 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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