In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
Eating fast food is the choice of many people because they are convenient, cheap and tasty. However, many people are suffering from health problems as a result of consuming junk foods. Therefore, some people think government should impose a higher tax them .
Consumption of fast foods is associated with higher intake of salt, sugar and fat. These contents result many health problems such as obesity, type 2 diabetes, and cholesterol etc. Similarly, physical and mental development of small children or teen age kids is directly related to their food intake. Unhealthy and junk food could make them lazy, and could also affect brain development. Nutritionist suggest we need to eat wide variety of foods including vegetables, fruits and salads to be healthy. It is really important to encourage people to eat more healthy and diverse food.
Imposing higher tax might be an option to discourage people to eat unhealthy foods to some extend. Although, it is not guarantee that people will reduce consumption of fast food even after higher tax, but at least government get additional resources to spend on hospital, research activities or awareness program. Higher tax on junk food and utilising that money to improve community health is a good trade off. On the other hand, fast food business owners are making bigger profit in compare to some other business. It is imperative to impose extra tax on their profit for fairness reason too.
Healthy eating habits not only promote people health but also reduce the crowd in hospital. So it is also important to teach people about healthy eating in addition to imposing higher tax on unhealthy foods alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, really, similarly, so, therefore, at least, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10661764706 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56024303983 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9305887825 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45225638707 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147749076089 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690317252565 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284504481989 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807370567422 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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